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Post by Paul on Aug 17, 2007 0:10:44 GMT 10
seems you guys know me and my tastes a bit too well as for the feedback i say credit where credits due, i'm not afraid to leave negative feedback if required, just wish other members would read it and leave feedback cos this page is starting to look like Pauls thread to kiss Allans ass LOL
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Post by Allan on Aug 17, 2007 1:21:51 GMT 10
LOL, Paul. Your feedback is appreciated, though. I'm hoping other people will discover Dominion at some point, too. Maybe one day. And I've just written act two of 1.12, so that shouldn't be too far away now.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2007 12:15:52 GMT 10
Assuming I can get to it in the next 24 hours. Which I'll try very hard to do. And, the Asta feedback thread is looking like my kiss up to Irene thread, Paul, so I'd say it's only fair you have your own.
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Post by Allan on Aug 17, 2007 12:47:52 GMT 10
Assuming I can get to it in the next 24 hours. Which I'll try very hard to do. Oh, I wasn't meaning immediately available, or anywhere near there. I still have the trivia to finish writing and post, which I was going to try and get done before I write act three. So there's no rush there, Marie.
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Post by Paul on Sept 24, 2007 21:51:30 GMT 10
well i finally got around to reading 13 and i really enjoyed it, i really like how the fred/illaria situation is developing and i cant wait to finaly read a bit more about hext he seems like he could be really intresting, as i keep saying i love this series, keep em coming
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Post by Allan on Sept 25, 2007 10:02:21 GMT 10
Thanks for the comments, Paul. Always appreciated.
Re Fred/Illyria, episode 1.15 should develop the Fred/Illyria situation quite a bit further.
Re Hext, episode 1.14 (which I should have posted soon) features a bit of Hext. Somewhere around 1.17, we'll see quite a bit of Hext, and will finally learn about what his motives actually are.
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Post by Allan on Oct 13, 2007 23:45:57 GMT 10
Just so you guys know, the much delayed episode 1.15 is coming! After a really hectic few weeks, I've finally gotten up to act one written, and will be writing the rest of the episode over the next week or so, and will post it once Marie has had a chance to beta it. Apologies for the delay, I've just been really busy (and a little slack).
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Post by Paul on Nov 6, 2007 19:38:55 GMT 10
ooppps gotten a little behind on dominion, promise to read 14 and 15 a.s.a.p and will let you know what i think right away "sorry"
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Post by Allan on Nov 6, 2007 21:33:18 GMT 10
No need to apologise, Paul. I still haven't started writing 1.16 yet (hopefully I'll get a little done tonight), so that's still a way off. I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts when you get the chance, though.
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Post by Allan on Nov 18, 2007 23:27:42 GMT 10
ooppps gotten a little behind on dominion, promise to read 14 and 15 a.s.a.p and will let you know what i think right away "sorry" You still haven't read them (or at least feedbacked), Paul! No rush, all's good (though I am looking forward to your thoughts, with 14 being a big Bob episode, and 15 moving things forward). And just a quick note about 1.16. It shouldn't be too far off, I've written the second act, and will hopefully have the episode written and ready for edits in the next few days. I'm not feeling quite so burned out from the writing anymore, so hopefully the next few episodes will be out a little quicker.
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Post by Paul on Nov 20, 2007 2:46:58 GMT 10
well i have finally got up to speed with my reading, and im still loving it, have no critism of any episodes, and i cant wait for 16 the plots moving along really nicely and it has me trying to guess the outcome of the season just like all good tv shows, keep up the great work
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Post by Allan on Nov 20, 2007 18:02:12 GMT 10
Thanks, Paul. Much appreciated. And only 7 more episodes to go, so you won't be guessing for too much longer.
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Post by Paul on Nov 27, 2007 4:09:45 GMT 10
i cant believe you killed off illyaria, your such a meanie, another great episode by the way, i wasnt a great fan of faith in this episode but i think you wrote her character spot on, i liked the tension between her and bob but i hope there not going to go down that road, well done mate
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Post by Allan on Nov 27, 2007 18:02:35 GMT 10
Thanks, Paul. Re Fred/Illyria, there's still more to come on that point. Just because now Illyria's gone and Fred can't access the Dominion doesn't mean we won't be seeing her. Re Faith/Bob, it was a tough thing to right. Bob's a little anti-Slayer given the events of the season, and he's in a particularly bad mood over the Hext situation and Illyria. He wasn't giving Faith an easy time, and she was biting back. Their relationship will develop more as the season progresses, and hopefully Faith will come across as more likeable.
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Post by Paul on Jan 19, 2008 11:39:11 GMT 10
another great ep. allan. i can sense things coming together for a messy finale, and im really looking forwards to it, still cant believe that miranda is still alive tho, she has had ssooooo many chances, if i was a super villian i would of killed her off age's ago, she's screwed up way to many times
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Post by Allan on Jan 19, 2008 18:26:16 GMT 10
Thanks for the feedback as always, Paul. Miranda has screwed up a little bit, huh? There is a reason why she's been given some "extra" chances, though, and they'll be revealed in the season's final three episodes. Btw, episode 1.18 is written, though I'm holding off posting it for a little while, so I can get through more of 1.19, and have the final three come out within a decent timeframe of each other with any luck.
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Post by Allan on Mar 10, 2008 23:22:11 GMT 10
Just a quick update about the status of the final three episodes. I've just completed 1.21 and have passed it to Marie for edits, which leaves me 1.22 to go. I'm hoping to have it done within a couple of weeks, and will post 1.20 then, followed reasonably closely by 1.21 and 1.22. It's taking me a little longer than I'd anticipated to get through the final episodes, but hopefully they'll be worth the wait.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2008 10:55:53 GMT 10
It's taken me a little longer to read through and comment on than usual, too, mostly due to stuff at work. I'm hoping to finish what Allan's given me so far by this weekend as I'll be out of town the next weekend. So, hopefully our adoring fan won't have to wait much longer. Do let me know what you're thinking of in terms of the time frame, since I'll be gone for a few days at the end of next week, so that I can let you know if there will be a problem on my end.
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Post by Allan on Mar 11, 2008 21:14:58 GMT 10
There's no real rush on a timeframe, Marie. I was thinking of posting 1.20 when 1.22's written, with a week or two between episodes.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 12, 2008 13:25:31 GMT 10
That'll work for me. I'll have the rest of 1.20 and the first two acts of 1.21 to you before leaving for Chicago. And I'll only be gone a few days, so I shouldn't need to do much catching up.
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