Post by raynesnoir on Jun 19, 2007 16:31:48 GMT 10
*Note* As of Spring 2007, Season 1 episodes will be recreated as "Raven Remastered" episodes. The entire original run of season 1 and 2 episodes as well as 3.6 will be redone to add to the quality of the series. The purpose is to make seasons 1 and 2 to the quality of seasons 3 and 4. Look in the index for the Remastered episodes. The originals are posted for comparison*
Raven Episode 3.6
“Joseph Greaves, Six Feet Deep”
Open to: Michael in a dark ally, looking around the dark corners for other people. He pulls a tray out of his pocket onto the dumpster lid beside him. He then grabs a bag of white powder and puts some on the tray. He stumbles with putting the bag back into his pocket, eventually dropping it to the ground.
Michael: Shit!
Michael shakes his head and takes a straw from his pocket. He puts his nose to the straw and sniffs ups some of the powder, squinting his nose as it goes up. She puts the tray back in his pocket and throws the straw to the ground. He stumbles back into the wall just as the door beside him swings open, knocking him over. Galen walks through the doorway and sees Michael.
Galen: There you are!
Cut to: Michael’s point of view, things are blurry and distorted, the lights and colours are blurred.
Galen (Voice sounding distant): What are you doing on the street like that? Get up you idiot.
Galen walks to Michael, Michael backs away as Galen grabs him and pulls him up. Everything rushes by with a blur on the way up. Michael leans into the wall.
Cut to: Regular view once more. Galen shakes his head.
Galen: You’re high, aren’t you?
Michael stares at him, sweat beginning to roll down his head. Galen shakes his head. After a beat-
Michael: Y-yes I’m high.
Michael tries to stand straight, Galen shakes his head more.
Galen: Well we have stuff to do. Come on!
Michael: Wh-what?
Galen: What do you think; I was speaking German or something? Come on!
Galen grabs Michael and shoves him along in front of him, Michael stumbling as he walks.
Cut to: Leora standing in a graveyard, a vampire growl comes from the right. Leora seems to be watching something, eyes fixed. Its Caitlin fighting a vampire. Caitlin gets knocked down and grunts. The vampire smiles and grits his teeth. Caitlin flings herself up and smiles, almost mocking the vampire. She holds out her hand and a small flash of light comes from it, but not enough to do anything. Caitlin looks at her hand in shock.
Caitlin: What?
The vampires looks at her in puzzlement.
Vampire: A parlor trick?
Caitlin: No! I’ll kick your ass eventually!
The vampire growls once more, Caitlin holds out bother her hands as he charges at her, minimal light comes from each. She screams as the vampire almost hits her. Suddenly a fireball engulfs the vampire, dusting it. Leora stands beside Caitlin and breathes in deeply.
Leora: Control, you have none.
Caitlin: What?
Leora: I’ve come to the conclusion that you have to be in a certain state of mind in order to properly use these powers. You’ve been getting weaker as your excitement about them has been wearing off.
Caitlin: So what, I have to drink a lot of expressos before I fight?
Leora: I’m sure other moods bring it one too. Powerful ones; angry, depression, bliss. Control just seems to be our problem right now.
Caitlin: You’ll help me, right?
Leora: I will… if I can.
Caitlin smiles.
Caitlin: We’ve got a long night ahead then!
Cut to: Michael standing over a grave. He tosses some long bones right beside the headstone that reads “Joseph Greaves, 1987-2005, Beloved Son For Too Short A Time”. Michael looks to Galen, leaning on a nearby tree.
Michael: A-are you sure I can do this?
Galen: The Greaves are paying good money to see their son again. You flanked on me last time due to drugs, you can’t again.
Michael turns back to the grave.
Michael: Something might go wrong.
Galen: In which you will have to fix it or I will bust your ass!
Michael: Ok… ok.
Galen: I don’t care if you smoked all the weed in Vancouver, get your ass going!
Michael sighs and takes out a knife. He winces as he slashes his right wrist, blood dripping immediately. He holds out his arm as he walks around the grave, blood dripping as he goes. He stops when he completes a rectangle around the newly places earth. He kneels down and closes his eyes, gripping onto one of the bones. Sweat pours down his forehead and he almost stumbles, probably from the drugs. A loud rumbling comes from the earth as it shakes. Michael opens his eyes in fear just before a spark of energy slams into him, sending him back. Galen becomes alert immediately, he helps Michael up slowly.
Michael: I could feel it… evil… great evil!
Galen: What?
The earth shakes as a teen in a tuxedo crawls up to the top, he flings himself up fast. His face is going grey, his hair is long and stringy brown. He’s very unrealistically skinny and tall. His eyes are dark and inhuman. He hisses as he jumps, really fast, onto Galen. Galen yells as Joseph sinks his teeth into Galen’s shoulder.
End Teaser.
Theme Song: Butterflies and Hurricanes © Muse
Starring:
Kate Beckinsale - Leora Byrne
AJ Cook - Carmen White-Rayne
Milla Jovovich - Feora Byrne
Caitlin Wachs - Caitlin Smith
Peter Krause - Galen Byrne
Tygh Runyan - Michael Duran
And Michael Vartan as Arthur Rayne
Guest Starring:
Teddy Dunn as Joseph Greaves
Created by:
Alexander Brown
And Travis Truant-Simpson
Produced by:
Alexander Brown
Andrew Sutherland
Joe Sessumes
And Travis Truant-Simpson
Written by:
Alexander Brown
A fanfiction based off of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, created by Joss Whedon. © Mutant Enemy, and 20th Century Fox. No profit is being made off of the original characters or concepts.
All original characters © Alexander Brown and Sacred Circle Productions.
In Association with: SORCERESS OF CRIMSON FALLS created by Travis Truant-Simpson, BROKEN DESTINY created by Joe Sessumes and Alexander Brown, And LIGHT OF BEACONSFIELD created by Andrew Sutherland.
Raven Episode 3.6
“Joseph Greaves, Six Feet Deep”
Open to: Michael in a dark ally, looking around the dark corners for other people. He pulls a tray out of his pocket onto the dumpster lid beside him. He then grabs a bag of white powder and puts some on the tray. He stumbles with putting the bag back into his pocket, eventually dropping it to the ground.
Michael: Shit!
Michael shakes his head and takes a straw from his pocket. He puts his nose to the straw and sniffs ups some of the powder, squinting his nose as it goes up. She puts the tray back in his pocket and throws the straw to the ground. He stumbles back into the wall just as the door beside him swings open, knocking him over. Galen walks through the doorway and sees Michael.
Galen: There you are!
Cut to: Michael’s point of view, things are blurry and distorted, the lights and colours are blurred.
Galen (Voice sounding distant): What are you doing on the street like that? Get up you idiot.
Galen walks to Michael, Michael backs away as Galen grabs him and pulls him up. Everything rushes by with a blur on the way up. Michael leans into the wall.
Cut to: Regular view once more. Galen shakes his head.
Galen: You’re high, aren’t you?
Michael stares at him, sweat beginning to roll down his head. Galen shakes his head. After a beat-
Michael: Y-yes I’m high.
Michael tries to stand straight, Galen shakes his head more.
Galen: Well we have stuff to do. Come on!
Michael: Wh-what?
Galen: What do you think; I was speaking German or something? Come on!
Galen grabs Michael and shoves him along in front of him, Michael stumbling as he walks.
Cut to: Leora standing in a graveyard, a vampire growl comes from the right. Leora seems to be watching something, eyes fixed. Its Caitlin fighting a vampire. Caitlin gets knocked down and grunts. The vampire smiles and grits his teeth. Caitlin flings herself up and smiles, almost mocking the vampire. She holds out her hand and a small flash of light comes from it, but not enough to do anything. Caitlin looks at her hand in shock.
Caitlin: What?
The vampires looks at her in puzzlement.
Vampire: A parlor trick?
Caitlin: No! I’ll kick your ass eventually!
The vampire growls once more, Caitlin holds out bother her hands as he charges at her, minimal light comes from each. She screams as the vampire almost hits her. Suddenly a fireball engulfs the vampire, dusting it. Leora stands beside Caitlin and breathes in deeply.
Leora: Control, you have none.
Caitlin: What?
Leora: I’ve come to the conclusion that you have to be in a certain state of mind in order to properly use these powers. You’ve been getting weaker as your excitement about them has been wearing off.
Caitlin: So what, I have to drink a lot of expressos before I fight?
Leora: I’m sure other moods bring it one too. Powerful ones; angry, depression, bliss. Control just seems to be our problem right now.
Caitlin: You’ll help me, right?
Leora: I will… if I can.
Caitlin smiles.
Caitlin: We’ve got a long night ahead then!
Cut to: Michael standing over a grave. He tosses some long bones right beside the headstone that reads “Joseph Greaves, 1987-2005, Beloved Son For Too Short A Time”. Michael looks to Galen, leaning on a nearby tree.
Michael: A-are you sure I can do this?
Galen: The Greaves are paying good money to see their son again. You flanked on me last time due to drugs, you can’t again.
Michael turns back to the grave.
Michael: Something might go wrong.
Galen: In which you will have to fix it or I will bust your ass!
Michael: Ok… ok.
Galen: I don’t care if you smoked all the weed in Vancouver, get your ass going!
Michael sighs and takes out a knife. He winces as he slashes his right wrist, blood dripping immediately. He holds out his arm as he walks around the grave, blood dripping as he goes. He stops when he completes a rectangle around the newly places earth. He kneels down and closes his eyes, gripping onto one of the bones. Sweat pours down his forehead and he almost stumbles, probably from the drugs. A loud rumbling comes from the earth as it shakes. Michael opens his eyes in fear just before a spark of energy slams into him, sending him back. Galen becomes alert immediately, he helps Michael up slowly.
Michael: I could feel it… evil… great evil!
Galen: What?
The earth shakes as a teen in a tuxedo crawls up to the top, he flings himself up fast. His face is going grey, his hair is long and stringy brown. He’s very unrealistically skinny and tall. His eyes are dark and inhuman. He hisses as he jumps, really fast, onto Galen. Galen yells as Joseph sinks his teeth into Galen’s shoulder.
End Teaser.
Theme Song: Butterflies and Hurricanes © Muse
Starring:
Kate Beckinsale - Leora Byrne
AJ Cook - Carmen White-Rayne
Milla Jovovich - Feora Byrne
Caitlin Wachs - Caitlin Smith
Peter Krause - Galen Byrne
Tygh Runyan - Michael Duran
And Michael Vartan as Arthur Rayne
Guest Starring:
Teddy Dunn as Joseph Greaves
Created by:
Alexander Brown
And Travis Truant-Simpson
Produced by:
Alexander Brown
Andrew Sutherland
Joe Sessumes
And Travis Truant-Simpson
Written by:
Alexander Brown
A fanfiction based off of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, created by Joss Whedon. © Mutant Enemy, and 20th Century Fox. No profit is being made off of the original characters or concepts.
All original characters © Alexander Brown and Sacred Circle Productions.
In Association with: SORCERESS OF CRIMSON FALLS created by Travis Truant-Simpson, BROKEN DESTINY created by Joe Sessumes and Alexander Brown, And LIGHT OF BEACONSFIELD created by Andrew Sutherland.
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