Post by Lex on Jan 16, 2007 6:54:41 GMT 10
Series: Shadow Stalker
Episode: 1.06 – The Rule Of Toole
Writer: Lex
Editor: Alex Hart
Rating: UK Rating 12 (Language and Upsetting Scenes)
Shadow Stalker is officially affiliated with Rogue Redemption, an awesome spin-off created by Amber.
I do not claim credit for any of Joss Whedon’s creation and the featuring of his characters and episodes in this series is simply for my pleasure and not at all for financial gain as I do all this for free! All characters not affiliated with Jossverse belong to me, as do the plot lines. Season One starts alongside Season 6 of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Season 3 of Angel and is in association with Rogue Redemption, (Amber); Chosen, (Heather); BtVS Seasons 8 + 9 and AtS Season 6, (Alex Hart); Raven (Alexander Brown); Sorceress Of Crimson Falls (Travis); and Wishful Thinking (Ben).
RACK (V/O): Previously on Shadow Stalker
SUNNYDALE
BAR AREA – INT.BRONZE – MORNING
XAK and TOOLE are meeting for the first time.
TOOLE: I’m Toole.
XAK looks at him with a puzzled expression while they shake hands.
CUT TO –
Various images of MELODY from previous episodes blast on to the screen. Her facing off with CHARLIE and CATE in the Mall. Her and CATE in The Bronze and the store.
TOOLE (V/O): So…what’s your deal with red?
CATE (V/O): She’s an old friend.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
TOOLE’S OFFICE – INT.BRONZE - NIGHT
TOOLE: She didn’t look like a friend.
CATE: (smiling and sipping her wine) She’s not anymore I guess. We didn’t exactly leave on good terms…
She looks down.
CATE: (quietly) …Well, that’s one way of putting things.
TOOLE: Well that’s the way it goes with some people.
CATE: I guess, some people just don’t click. Melody and I? We clicked…but un-clicked just as easily.
TOOLE: I had a friend like that…I mean you can know someone a lifetime and never have a true…
CATE: (cuts him off) …connection?
TOOLE smiles at her, she smiles back.
CATE: I didn’t picture you as the loner type?
TOOLE: Yep, afraid so. Tooley no mates here. Seriously…that’s what they call me.
CATE looks sad at this revelation.
CATE: What no family?
TOOLE: Parents died when I was younger, had to raise my brother since I was a teenager.
CATE: God that’s awful…where’s your brother now?
There is a pause, he looks down. Not sure how to answer it.
TOOLE: He died, not so long ago. We kind of fell out a while back and I barely saw him till recently. Then out of nowhere…he just…
She places a hand on his.
CATE: It’s ok…
He smiles, trying to remain masculine and not cry.
CATE: (quietly) I’m sorry.
FADE TO BLACK
TEASER
SUNNYDALE
CORRIDOR – INT.HOSPITAL - NIGHT
The camera is travelling down a hospital corridor. The oppressive sterilised walls loom over the camera, as it seems to be heading towards a certain room. Faint voices can be heard, which get louder as the camera approaches the room.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
OPERATING ROOM – INT.HOSPITAL – NIGHT
The camera pushes through a hospital ward to show that there are many doctors. The doctors have blood on their hands. They are rushing around, passing various medical appliances.
NURSE: …more splinters in the skull.
She pulls one out.
DOCTOR: More bleeding, back left of the scalp, I can’t stop it.
NURSE #2: Here.
She passes him a large surgical cloth, which stops the bleeding momentarily, but thick red blood begins to seep through the cloth soaking the DOCTOR’S hands. The heart monitor bleeps louder and faster.
NURSE: He’s going into shock.
More blood pours out onto her hands as she pulls out a larger splinter.
DOCTOR: (panicking) I can’t stop it!
The heart monitor bleeps rapidly…then stops on a continuous drone…
DOCTOR: (sighing) Let’s call it…
The other NURSES look at one another, upset and frustrated.
The camera moves to the left…
NURSE #2: (her voice starts off loud and gets quieter) Time of death, 1.06am, victim died of sustained head injuries after…
The camera passes through the left wall cutting off the rest of her speech.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
CORRIDOR – INT.HOSPITAL - NIGHT
The camera comes out in front of XAK and CHARLIE who are walking down the hospital corridor with coffee in their hands. CHARLIE is carrying two cups whereas XAK is only carrying one.
CHARLIE: So he’s gonna be ok?
XAK: The doctor said he sustained bad head trauma, but he should be out within a few days.
CHARLIE: He’s been here for a week now, why has it taken this long to give him a diagnosis.
They turn a corner.
XAK: Charlie this is Sunnydale. If I’ve learnt anything from my time here it’s that normal human injuries are not a priority in comparison to vampire bites and demon attacks.
CHARLIE: …it was a demon attack!
XAK: He fell and hit his head…it’s what we told the doctors…
They walk for a while without talking.
CHARLIE: (sighing) This town is so naïve…
XAK: Tell me about it.
He looks at her, then looks back ahead.
XAK: So, what’s up with Cate?
CHARLIE: Beats me, she has taken it kinda rough though, huh?
XAK: Yeah, I didn’t know those two were so close.
CHARLIE: Neither did I, I mean when did they even talk?
XAK: Christmas?
CHARLIE: But they knew eachother before then, why didn’t she tell me?
XAK looks at her.
XAK: We were kinda wrapped up in other stuff…
CHARLIE looks at him, they stop, she looks down and sighs slightly.
CHARLIE: Oh…right.
XAK touches her shoulder, reassuringly.
XAK: Don’t feel bad.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
HOSPITAL ROOM – INT.HOSPITAL – NIGHT
CHARLIE (V/O): I guess, I just wanna be here for her…for both of them…
The camera cuts to a close up on TOOLE’S face. He doesn’t look good, his eyes are red, he’s tired. Exhausted. The camera pulls back to show a bandage wrapped around his head and he’s lying in a hospital bed. He sighs, and looks to his left. The camera reveals CATE asleep in the chair next to him, she’s dressed in the same clothes from Christmas. He smiles at her. She looks peaceful. He looks back straight ahead. Something catches his eye. He glances back round to the door. A MAN is standing there, smiling at him. (He is played by Chad Michael Murray). TOOLE blinks and shakes his head slightly…he closes his eyes. He opens them again, he leans forwards slightly, squinting.
TOOLE: (weakly) Bro?
FADE TO BLACK
Episode: 1.06 – The Rule Of Toole
Writer: Lex
Editor: Alex Hart
Rating: UK Rating 12 (Language and Upsetting Scenes)
Shadow Stalker is officially affiliated with Rogue Redemption, an awesome spin-off created by Amber.
I do not claim credit for any of Joss Whedon’s creation and the featuring of his characters and episodes in this series is simply for my pleasure and not at all for financial gain as I do all this for free! All characters not affiliated with Jossverse belong to me, as do the plot lines. Season One starts alongside Season 6 of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Season 3 of Angel and is in association with Rogue Redemption, (Amber); Chosen, (Heather); BtVS Seasons 8 + 9 and AtS Season 6, (Alex Hart); Raven (Alexander Brown); Sorceress Of Crimson Falls (Travis); and Wishful Thinking (Ben).
RACK (V/O): Previously on Shadow Stalker
SUNNYDALE
BAR AREA – INT.BRONZE – MORNING
XAK and TOOLE are meeting for the first time.
TOOLE: I’m Toole.
XAK looks at him with a puzzled expression while they shake hands.
CUT TO –
Various images of MELODY from previous episodes blast on to the screen. Her facing off with CHARLIE and CATE in the Mall. Her and CATE in The Bronze and the store.
TOOLE (V/O): So…what’s your deal with red?
CATE (V/O): She’s an old friend.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
TOOLE’S OFFICE – INT.BRONZE - NIGHT
TOOLE: She didn’t look like a friend.
CATE: (smiling and sipping her wine) She’s not anymore I guess. We didn’t exactly leave on good terms…
She looks down.
CATE: (quietly) …Well, that’s one way of putting things.
TOOLE: Well that’s the way it goes with some people.
CATE: I guess, some people just don’t click. Melody and I? We clicked…but un-clicked just as easily.
TOOLE: I had a friend like that…I mean you can know someone a lifetime and never have a true…
CATE: (cuts him off) …connection?
TOOLE smiles at her, she smiles back.
CATE: I didn’t picture you as the loner type?
TOOLE: Yep, afraid so. Tooley no mates here. Seriously…that’s what they call me.
CATE looks sad at this revelation.
CATE: What no family?
TOOLE: Parents died when I was younger, had to raise my brother since I was a teenager.
CATE: God that’s awful…where’s your brother now?
There is a pause, he looks down. Not sure how to answer it.
TOOLE: He died, not so long ago. We kind of fell out a while back and I barely saw him till recently. Then out of nowhere…he just…
She places a hand on his.
CATE: It’s ok…
He smiles, trying to remain masculine and not cry.
CATE: (quietly) I’m sorry.
FADE TO BLACK
TEASER
SUNNYDALE
CORRIDOR – INT.HOSPITAL - NIGHT
The camera is travelling down a hospital corridor. The oppressive sterilised walls loom over the camera, as it seems to be heading towards a certain room. Faint voices can be heard, which get louder as the camera approaches the room.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
OPERATING ROOM – INT.HOSPITAL – NIGHT
The camera pushes through a hospital ward to show that there are many doctors. The doctors have blood on their hands. They are rushing around, passing various medical appliances.
NURSE: …more splinters in the skull.
She pulls one out.
DOCTOR: More bleeding, back left of the scalp, I can’t stop it.
NURSE #2: Here.
She passes him a large surgical cloth, which stops the bleeding momentarily, but thick red blood begins to seep through the cloth soaking the DOCTOR’S hands. The heart monitor bleeps louder and faster.
NURSE: He’s going into shock.
More blood pours out onto her hands as she pulls out a larger splinter.
DOCTOR: (panicking) I can’t stop it!
The heart monitor bleeps rapidly…then stops on a continuous drone…
DOCTOR: (sighing) Let’s call it…
The other NURSES look at one another, upset and frustrated.
The camera moves to the left…
NURSE #2: (her voice starts off loud and gets quieter) Time of death, 1.06am, victim died of sustained head injuries after…
The camera passes through the left wall cutting off the rest of her speech.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
CORRIDOR – INT.HOSPITAL - NIGHT
The camera comes out in front of XAK and CHARLIE who are walking down the hospital corridor with coffee in their hands. CHARLIE is carrying two cups whereas XAK is only carrying one.
CHARLIE: So he’s gonna be ok?
XAK: The doctor said he sustained bad head trauma, but he should be out within a few days.
CHARLIE: He’s been here for a week now, why has it taken this long to give him a diagnosis.
They turn a corner.
XAK: Charlie this is Sunnydale. If I’ve learnt anything from my time here it’s that normal human injuries are not a priority in comparison to vampire bites and demon attacks.
CHARLIE: …it was a demon attack!
XAK: He fell and hit his head…it’s what we told the doctors…
They walk for a while without talking.
CHARLIE: (sighing) This town is so naïve…
XAK: Tell me about it.
He looks at her, then looks back ahead.
XAK: So, what’s up with Cate?
CHARLIE: Beats me, she has taken it kinda rough though, huh?
XAK: Yeah, I didn’t know those two were so close.
CHARLIE: Neither did I, I mean when did they even talk?
XAK: Christmas?
CHARLIE: But they knew eachother before then, why didn’t she tell me?
XAK looks at her.
XAK: We were kinda wrapped up in other stuff…
CHARLIE looks at him, they stop, she looks down and sighs slightly.
CHARLIE: Oh…right.
XAK touches her shoulder, reassuringly.
XAK: Don’t feel bad.
CUT TO – SUNNYDALE
HOSPITAL ROOM – INT.HOSPITAL – NIGHT
CHARLIE (V/O): I guess, I just wanna be here for her…for both of them…
The camera cuts to a close up on TOOLE’S face. He doesn’t look good, his eyes are red, he’s tired. Exhausted. The camera pulls back to show a bandage wrapped around his head and he’s lying in a hospital bed. He sighs, and looks to his left. The camera reveals CATE asleep in the chair next to him, she’s dressed in the same clothes from Christmas. He smiles at her. She looks peaceful. He looks back straight ahead. Something catches his eye. He glances back round to the door. A MAN is standing there, smiling at him. (He is played by Chad Michael Murray). TOOLE blinks and shakes his head slightly…he closes his eyes. He opens them again, he leans forwards slightly, squinting.
TOOLE: (weakly) Bro?
FADE TO BLACK