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Post by Casi on Mar 20, 2007 13:29:51 GMT 10
What can I say? I'd love to know what you guys think. So, if you've got thoughts on anything I've written, let me know.
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Post by Beck on Apr 17, 2007 14:40:57 GMT 10
LOL I read your first two Cuddle Battles Loved the Supernatural one, Dean's obsession with his car is not healthy The first one was nice and sweet
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Post by Casi on Apr 18, 2007 3:11:47 GMT 10
Awww, thanks! That was actually the first supernatural piece I've written. Ever. I think I do a better job with Sam than with Dean, but it was so much fun to write them as kids in the later entries!
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Post by Amber on May 7, 2007 12:52:39 GMT 10
I've just read "Not Like Us", and I thought it was lovely. As far as a scene that should have actually been in the show, this is one of them. We never really got to see how Giles would tell Buffy (or how she would find out), and how she would react. It was written really beautifully. The dialogue and reactions between Buffy and Giles were great, and the characterization was spot-on, as always. I don't have anything negative to say. I loved it.
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2007 7:37:14 GMT 10
I read some of your Cuddle Battle entries (though not all of them due to time and fandom interest, as I don't watch SN). Let's see if I can remember which ones--2 Spuffy, 1 Spike/Andrew, 1 Mal/Inara, 1 Willow/Xander. (Man, it sounds like I'm placing an order for something!! ) Anyway, as always, very well written (though I detected a few grammar slips Darn my ever-watching beta eye!). You've always written Spuffy well, so no surprise there. The Spike/Andrew one was very well done, very funny. I think I was laughing the whole time because it sounded so much like what Andrew really might have been thinking! I think my least favorite was the Mal/Inara piece. Maybe I don't have as much of a grasp on the Firefly 'verse as you do, so I don't see what you see, but given what I've taken away from the show and movie about their relationship and interaction I can't ever see it happening in that way. It seemed a bit forced to me. My favorite was the Xander/Willow piece. It was so sweet that you tied the Barbie into it and that it had that sentimental, make-me-feel-worse feeling. I just thought it was brilliantly done.
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Post by Casi on Jun 7, 2007 12:31:00 GMT 10
Hahaha, no worries on the Mal/Inara piece. I'm not really certain I like it either. I was trying to keep Firefly from being one of the most underrepresented fandoms in the thing, but Mal/Inara was the only pairing that didn't make me gag. I mean..who writes Jayne/River? Come on! And my grammar sucks yo.
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Post by Beck on Jun 13, 2007 13:59:36 GMT 10
I loved Mother. I don't have any constructive feedback to give, but I thought you captured the scene perfectly, and it was very much how it could have been. Awesome work
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Post by Casi on Jun 15, 2007 16:46:21 GMT 10
Thank you! Mother is one of my favorite pieces. I like writing Spike when he is concerned about Dawn or Joyce because I think those are his most human moments. They really get to me.
“Humility is like underwear, essential, but indecent if it shows”
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Post by Lizzie on Oct 5, 2007 12:11:57 GMT 10
I really liked Mother. Poor old Spike! I liked that he was going to pay for the flowers.
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