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[shred]

Nah, I think we would be fine. Thanks though.

But if you like, you (and all readers) can post here what they would like to see in season two.

[khurdjr15]

okay. I would like to see Tabitha and Asta become friends again.
A male demon character that works for good
And Asta and Xander relationship to continue

[shred]

Thanks for that.

Jan 4, 2009 4:27:55 GMT 10 khurdjr15 said:

And Asta and Xander relationship to continue

I'm so tempted to torture readers and not put them together.

[khurdjr15]

Plz dont. That would be horrible.
Oh u should read my series. Its called Destroyer.
Its about Connor

[khurdjr15]

So how is the second season coming along?
Any hints that u can give?

[shred]

We are still in the stage where ideas are being tossed around. Nothing concrete yet.

[khurdjr15]

Hey so how is the planning for Asta?
I cant wait for the new season. Oh and can u read my series the Destroyer. I posted the first three episodes

[shred]

Well, it's a bit tough now as I've started Uni and things are bound to pile up. Who knows whether I have time to write it much less do anything else.

[khurdjr15]

Well like i said. If u need help just ask.
I could totally help you write it

[shred]

Will keep that in mind, thanks!

[khurdjr15]

No problem.
Although I did have one idea form. If u want to hear it that is

[Shaun]

Feb 23, 2009 11:53:25 GMT 10 khurdjr15 said:

Oh and can u read my series the Destroyer. I posted the first three episodes

Please don't ask other members to read your series in their feedback thread. You can make your own feedback thread if you haven't already

[shred]

Feb 25, 2009 11:01:17 GMT 10 khurdjr15 said:

No problem.
Although I did have one idea form. If u want to hear it that is

Oh I would be happy to hear it. I always like to know what my readers like to see.

[khurdjr15]

Okay well this is how season 2 played out for me in my head.
Season 2: After 3 months of fighting demons and vamps with Andrew and Xander, Asta realises that she cant fight without Tabby and Pike (who has been helping her behind Tabby's back).

But before the group can get back together a new big bad attacks the city (The big Bad i figured could be a god, An invincible demon,an old one etc.).

SO Asta and the gang reunite to fight this new menace. Of course unbeknown to our heroes, Pike's new gf works for the big bad(wont find out until two episodes before the finale). Tabby meets a new guy even though she is reeling from losing David, Xander and Asta give there relationship a shot while Andrew gets a bf( In my head he is gay). But before the gang can come together as a family Spike returns from LA to help out. But Andrew gets in trouble for knowing for a while.

Then Tabby and Asta in one episode get trapped together and have to figure a way out, and along the way discuss how there friendship dissolved after a year. Pike's new gf is hated by Asta and Tabby. While Tabby's new guy is alot more than he seems.

But during the season finale someone will die. Who u might ask? I havent decided yet but its one name or face you wont forget. Oh and did i forget to mention someone in the gang has a dark secret. Who? Well thats for you to decide.

What do u think?

[Beck]

Won't comment on the rest, but I can't tell you for certain Andrew is straight in this series

[shred]

Thanks for your ideas! Will definitely keep them in mind when Beck and I are discussing season 2 (hopefully soon, Beck? )

Just a few comments...

Feb 25, 2009 15:24:24 GMT 10 khurdjr15 said:

Okay well this is how season 2 played out for me in my head.
Season 2: After 3 months of fighting demons and vamps with Andrew and Xander, Asta realises that she cant fight without Tabby and Pike (who has been helping her behind Tabby's back).

Heh. You read my mind there.

But before the group can get back together a new big bad attacks the city (The big Bad i figured could be a god, An invincible demon,an old one etc.).

The Big Bad being a god is a good idea but there may be a chance of the story becoming too similar to Glory's. Beck and I like to play with ideas that aren't done before (or at least something different). I'm afraid of this being too 'been there, done there'.

SO Asta and the gang reunite to fight this new menace. Of course unbeknown to our heroes, Pike's new gf works for the big bad(wont find out until two episodes before the finale). Tabby meets a new guy even though she is reeling from losing David, Xander and Asta give there relationship a shot while Andrew gets a bf( In my head he is gay).

I can tell you for sure that Tabby won't get a new guy this season. That is one of the few things that has been decided. I think it would be too soon for her and it would (for me anyway) cheapen David's death. I want to explore how much David's death affected Tabby in this season. It may not have translated well in writing but, to me, Tabitha loved David a lot. He was the Angel to her Buffy.

Not to sure about Pike's girlfriend being evil. We need to cut the guy a break.

As for Andrew, he's not gay in this series. Might introduce a love interest in a form of a female though.

But before the gang can come together as a family Spike returns from LA to help out. But Andrew gets in trouble for knowing for a while.

Beck and I have decided when we first started the series that neither Spike nor Angel will be crossing over to Asta. Mostly because she's a Spuffy and Spike fan and I'm a Bangel and Angel fan. Either one of them comes over and the writing would be bias - it would be unfair to the readers.

Then Tabby and Asta in one episode get trapped together and have to figure a way out, and along the way discuss how there friendship dissolved after a year.

Now, there's an idea.

But during the season finale someone will die. Who u might ask? I havent decided yet but its one name or face you wont forget.

I hope you don't mean any of the regular cast! Because I love them too much to kill them off.

Oh and did i forget to mention someone in the gang has a dark secret. Who? Well thats for you to decide.

Hmmm...it's going to be hard to decide who will have a dark secret as we know each character pretty well. Having someone with a dark secret might be a little out of character.

[khurdjr15]

Could i ask a favor of you?

[shred]

Sure. What's up?

[khurdjr15]

I was wondering if you could create avatars for my series the Destroyer so i could promote it

[shred]

Sure, no problem. Just PM me the pics and I'll do them up for you as soon as I can.