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Post by Allan on Jan 29, 2007 22:06:45 GMT 10
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Post by Paul on Jan 30, 2007 1:21:01 GMT 10
nicely done allan, i really enjoyed that, no negative feedback from me but i am slightly confused as to why bob seems to have taken her under his wing, may become clearer later on or maybe its cos he's just a nice guy, but cant wait to read some more
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Post by Allan on Jan 30, 2007 10:20:31 GMT 10
Thanks, Paul. Well, can Bob be trusted? Can any of them? All will be revealed somewhere within the next 21 episodes  It's something that I will be getting to down the track. |
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Post by Brittany Bear on Feb 8, 2007 7:37:08 GMT 10
Very cool. And Clem!
No negative comments here. Can't wait to find out more about Bob. I'm sure things will unravel later in the story. Keep it up, can' wait to read more
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Post by Allan on Feb 8, 2007 8:12:58 GMT 10
Thanks, Brittany.
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Post by Paul on Feb 8, 2007 9:05:10 GMT 10
very cool allan, im really enjoying reading this, one problem tho, whenever i picture bob i only see hellboy nothing else ,and that was before i noticed ron pearlmans name, keep em commin
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Post by Allan on Feb 8, 2007 9:22:24 GMT 10
Thanks for the feedback, Paul. I didn't even think of Hellboy until after I cast Ron Perlman...  It's kind of annoying to have that lingering, especially when people are noticing that without noticing it's Perlman. The original inspiration for the character was Blue Devil from the comics, though the characters didn't have much in common (aside from a "working class" demeanor, which Hellboy also shares). I'll see what I can do to set Bob apart from Hellboy (hopefully this would be a natural progression, though), and make him a character in his own right. Episode #4 will be Bob centric, and will be written by Marie, and she'll definitely be bringing some interesting stuff to the table.  |
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Post by Paul on Feb 8, 2007 9:35:51 GMT 10
the hellboy thing wasn't a criticism , you described bob excellently, its just me seeing a big red demon instead of a blue one, once i have an image in my head its hard for me to get rid of it
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Post by Allan on Feb 8, 2007 9:48:35 GMT 10
A big charcoal one, isn't he? He was originally supposed to be blue, actually, but I figured that with Illyria on the team, and a blueish chaos demon in the first episode, I was kind of overusing blue. Besides, it's easier for him to hide in shadows if he's charcoal coloured. And I'm glad it's not a criticism That said, when you mentioned Hellboy, you did make me think that the characters have their similarities. And I'd personally like them to be differentiated a bit more. EDIT - I checked, and he is charcoal. I was paranoid that I didn't end up updating the colour. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2007 9:57:48 GMT 10
OK, I don't get the Hellboy reference, but as Allan said, episode 4 will be all about Bob and hopefully I'll be able to make him into his own, you know...give him something that's uniquely his.
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Post by Allan on Feb 8, 2007 13:10:55 GMT 10
And from what Marie's already mentioned to me about it, I would say that it definitely does! |
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Post by Paul on Feb 27, 2007 1:52:19 GMT 10
well done allan, they just keep getting better . cant wait for number 4
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Post by Allan on Feb 27, 2007 8:56:53 GMT 10
Thanks, Paul. I really actually think this episode was as good as the first two at all, so I'm glad you liked it. What was the saving grace? Btw, Marie's currently working on episode 4, and it's looking great so far! |
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Post by Paul on Feb 27, 2007 9:50:23 GMT 10
i liked how you worked in such a huge cast, and they all seemed to have a purpose for being there. not just thrown in for the sake of it. and ive always liked flashback scenes for some reason, they worked really well with the story
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Post by Allan on Feb 27, 2007 11:28:07 GMT 10
Thanks Paul, much appreciated. The size of the cast got a bit unweildy, and I was thinking that it worked out as too many.
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Post by Brittany Bear on Mar 7, 2007 9:18:34 GMT 10
I'm finally having time to cintinue reading it, and its great. I'd have to agree with Paul,you worked in such a huge cast and they all have a purpose.
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Post by Allan on Mar 7, 2007 23:06:15 GMT 10
Thanks, Brittany. Much appreciated! |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2007 4:43:33 GMT 10
I'm hoping we'll be able to get episode 4 out to you soon. However, I'm writing it, so...we'll see. To get it out to you in a more timely manner, though, Allan, could you please find a solution to the Willow/phone thing? Pretty please? To give you a little bit to look forward to, it's titled "Past Mistakes" and will focus on Bob and his past. |
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Post by Allan on Mar 8, 2007 12:11:54 GMT 10
I'll have a good think about the Willow/phone thing, and get you a solution Btw, have you written any more? If so, if you could send it to me, that could feed into my solution. And guys, what I've read of episode 4 so far is great. I'm definitely looking forward to it. |
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Post by Brittany Bear on Mar 9, 2007 13:23:34 GMT 10
I can't wait till' 4! Is it about Bob? I hope so, I must know more about Bob...
Also, finally, a series with Clem!
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) here, please.
It's something that I will be getting to down the track.
It's kind of annoying to have that lingering, especially when people are noticing that without noticing it's Perlman.